TITLE: I'm Dying Tonight

AUTHOR: RoswellOracle

RATING: TEEN

CATEGORY: Max POV

REPOSTING:
Please ask permission before reposting. I like to know where my story is going to live.

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DISCLAIMER:
Roswell, the characters and the story, are owned by Melinda Metz, Jason Katims and Fox Studios (although the way they have abused them I don't think they deserve them) and are used here purely for entertainment purposes.

Any additional characters or situations not mentioned in the show are the creation of my dementia.

ACKNOWLEDGEMENT:
Thanks to my good friend Ellie who helped me with this story.

SUMMARY:
Maxís thoughts and feelings as he is standing outside the observatory in ITLAITB after his fight with Liz and he thinks she has gone to Sweden.

CREDITS: Lyrics from songs used
Adema - Giving in
Linkin Park - With You
Nine Inch Nails - Hurt
Pearl Jam - Black
Simple Plan - Meet You There
Simple Plan - Perfect
Story of the Year - Until The Day I Die
Yellowcard - Only One
Yellowcard - Way Away

STATUS: Complete - Nov/2005







1 Part Story
2005 - © RoswellOracle & RoswellOracle.com

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Amazing ficlet. I love this piece even though it is so sad. Especially the part where he asks
himself if he could die of a broken heart. Wow. And the brutal honesty he has
about his actions with Tess were great.

I could totally see him not wanting to put her through the same pain in that moment and letting her
have her illusions for a bit. And I loved how he knew that she was deluding herself in
spite of all the evidence of his feelings for Liz, she would take what she could get
and try to make more out of it. Here it looks like he understood her pretty well.
I wish we could have seen him like that on the show.

But the best part IMHO was his line about Antar falling with him as their king and Tess as
their queen. Really fantastic and very Max.

Great fic, thanks for posting it.
- Ellie


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Wow, that was really great!

I really felt for Max by the end, poor thing!
- Heavenli24


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Oh! OMG you have done a great job at showing Max's point of view and not many of Roswell
fanfiction Writers do that to this extent you have done it. Even TV writers failled at
shwoing Max POV. Certainly he had no way to hold on any longer and Tess was there at
the wrong or perhaps right moment
- bloody crow


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wow..oh wow oh wow...that was excellent
- majiklmoon


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That was really great! I love the line about living in denial and Antar falling with the two of them as
leaders. Max seemed so hard on himself at times though I guess that comes from the
crazy power trips he realized he had been having. Either way, it was a very interesting read.

Excellent job!
- To_Kiss_A_Frog







Nominations & Awards



***Roswell Fanatics***




2005 - for:
Best Short Story




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2006 - for:
Best Fan Art Cover
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Best Short Story






***Roswell Heaven***




2006 - for:
CC/AU Independence Day award
aka Best short CC/AU fic






CC/AU Independence Day award
aka Best short CC/AU fic



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2007 - for:
CC/AU Independence Day Award
aka Best Short CC/AU Fic






***Roswellian Chronicles***




2006 - for:
Best Portrayal of the Healer
aka Best Portrayal of Max in a fic with aliens
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Best Need a Box of Kleenex Fic




Voted 2006 Round 1








***Majik's World of FanFic***




2006 - for:
Best Short Story
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Best Fan Fiction Art






***Eraser Room***




2005 - for:
Best POV/Non-Shipper Fic
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Saddest Fic





Saddest Fic



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Nominated for:
April 2006 CC Fic of the Month








***Memories***




2006 - for:
Best Short Fiction




Voted 2006 Round 2







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